Feedback:
-If car crash scene is to be included, raise demographic age from 12 to 15 as scenes may be too dark for a 12 certification: we decided to change our target audience to 15-20 so as not to offend or upset younger viewers and therefore changed the certification to a 15.
-Create more sub-plots so that there is more happening and develop narrative: we created the storyline of Megan's mother being pregnant (and we decided to introduce this in the first scene when Megan's mum texts her to tell her that she is pregnant). We also created the storyline of James, the boy who bullies Megan and spreads rumours about her, liking Megan and admitting his feelings towards the end of the film. This storyline, however, was not hinted at in the title sequence or the opening scene.
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