After showing the first draft of our title sequence to the class, we got the following feedback and made some changes:
- Change the font of the title: we changed the title 'Rumour' from a blocky font to a font that looked handwriting, which fitted with the theme of school.
- Add more colour to the titles: as most of the writing on screen was originally white, we changed the names of the cast and crew to bright colours.
- Shorten the shot time on the phone: the length of time that we showed shots of the phone in the opening scene were too long so we cut them down considerably so that the pace of the film didn't get too slow.
- Remove sound from production logo section and don't zoom in: we removed the twinkly sound that accompanied our production logo because it didn't fit with the logo or the film. We also stopped it from zooming in on the star because this made it seem too pixelated. In the end, we found that it was a better idea to redesign the production logo to make it clearer and more presentable.
